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Smile (Grand Highblood x Reader) Ch.1You are bored! Your name is (name) and now you are so fucking bored!! It's cold and raining and you are in your room reading some fanfiction of your favorite otp. But now you don't know what to do, so you decide to see what your best friend's last project was, ok first let's present your best friend and then you. Your best friend Akira (yup he's Japanese) is a hacker and nerd and you can even say that he create some machines and projects, he like aliens and want to know if they really exist, you really do like aliens but don't believe in their existence like Akira. You live with him because you lost your parents 2 year ago in an airplane acci
When life gives you CreepyPasta. VIIYou gulped. My imagination!? You inwardly screamed. You couldn't understand why anyone would want you around for your Imagination? Your imagination never got appreciated by people. You often got made fun of for it and felt out. You believed in things and thought of things that most people considered abnormal. You never took notes in class, you doodled. 
You never had friends because no-one wanted to hang out with the girl who sat at home instead of going out, who drew and wrote instead of talking to friends and getting on social networking sites.
Sure, your parents cared for you but, they never understood you and you loved them anyway because they didn't push away for you ideas. Granted they were hardly ever home because of the jobs they had and you understood that, and that only made the moments you got spend with them mean more.
But hey, it's not like these people are gonna expect you to stay here forever are they?
Splendormans' smile never disappeared as he ans
Smile (Grand Highblood x Reader) Ch.2~the signless~
You are searching for a place to hide from the rain, when you find a cave. You enter and wait for the rain to stop but it doesn’t seems that it will, so you decide that you’ll just wait here.

After a while you hear footsteps and see a small shadow that doesn’t really look like it’s one off the highbloods, it seems to search for a place to hide, just like you were and the sun was going to rise so you decide to help and pull her/him in to the cave and talk about how dangerous the sun is, you just think it’s a little troll who doesn’t know much about it.

But when you turn you see something you
Last Winter [JackFrostxReader] Pt.13
“I don’t hate you . . .”

“I know.”

Truth be told, Jack had not known that you didn’t hate him. You had been doing a very convincing job of wanting to dissect him that he had thought you did still hate him, but that, dissecting him, still seemed to be the case even after your confession of not hating him. Hearing those words, to him, was like a love confession because he’d had that thought in his head for so many years, and finally there was a confirmation that you had changed your mind.

Though you were currently laying out sharp scalpels and other assorted smaller knives on the study table, he was
Grace and Shawn - Chapter 1: The Therapy (FMG)Grace and Shawn - Chapter 1: The Therapy (Female Muscle Growth)
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Grace Ellsworth's crystal blue eyes were transfixed on the television screen.  If the announcer on the show was to be believed, a human being was about to attempt bench pressing a literal ton of weight on live television; without wearing a bench press shirt.  Then again, there was no reason for Grace to doubt the man's capability or the challenge's legitimacy.  After all, the man of the hour was none other than Shawn Masterson - Grace's, and millions of other women's dream crush.

As expected, the
The Eyes Of The Hunter: Chapter OneIt was silent. Too silent.

This alleyway was extremely quiet, so quiet that you could even hear the sound of your own blood pumping around your brain. The silence was so intense it filled the air around me with an eerie sensation, walking down this alleyway made me feel awkward, I felt like I was committing a serious crime by breaking the stillness with the sound of my heavy boots against the pavement. The rubbish bins down here were empty, they had been tipped over on purpose, some still had rubbish inside of them, but most of them were dented, snapped in half, or crushed into little squares. I noticed that no rats lived inside these bins.
Karasu - Part 21
“You called for me, Master?” Sagiri asked, sitting on folded knees across from the elder tengu. It was a warm afternoon — the rainy season had just ended, leaving the air thick with humidity.

“Yes,” Shima replied with a nod. “I have a task for you.”

Sagiri straightened in anticipation. Though she had been training with Shima for decades, she still leapt at any chance to prove herself. She wondered if she might once again be able to show her skills in battle, or perhaps to uphold her medical abilities with a new patient. It had been years since the attack at the western temple and there was only so m
Crashed (LokiXReader) 12You all turned and looked at Loki, who was once again casually leaning back against the wall. "Please do enlighten us," Bruce said, folding his arms.

"The chitauri." Loki said closing his eyes slowly before opening them again and tilting his head to look at Bruce. "The aliens? Why on earth would they want to take her?" Steve raised an eyebrow at him.

"Not just them. I was not their only ally." He leaned forward and rested his elbows on his knees. "Oh, do please take your sweet time in telling us," Tony said sarcastically as he rolled his eyes. Loki ran a hand through his tangled hair before lifting his head to look at Thor, "It is an old fr
Soup For Two? GT Ch 2"Now, what do we have here, hmmm?" James used an overly enthusiastic deep voice as he dangled the tiny borrower infront of his eyes.

He gazed into those wide golden brown eyes, and felt a rush of sadness flood through his veins.  It was a young borrower! A very young borrower indeed.

She had stopped thrashing about, and had begun to cry.  James's felt his smile vanished, replaced by a mask of pity and wonder.  James had to remind himself the creature was in distress- no matter how intriguing she appeared to be, the borrower was only a child.

James gently placed the borrower in the palm of his other hand and began to stand up to his full he
Crashed (LokiXReader) 14"He does not like me, Tony!" You continued arguing with him. "Keep denying it, but he does. And I'm pretty sure you're okay with that."

You lunged forward, hands curled into fists, prepared to bash Tony's nose in, until Steve wrapped an arm around your waist. You placed your hands on his arm and tried to pry it away, only causing him to tighten his grip. You kicked your feet, trying to free yourself.

"Tony, just drop it," You heard Steve say, his breathe whistling past your ear, "And (Y/N), calm down, I'm sure he was just kidding."

"I was, now if you don't mind I'm going to go hide behind Natasha." Tony scooted over so that he was standing
Crashed (LokiXReader) 8After breakfast, you stood up and began to help clear dishes away along with Steve and Bruce.

"That was amazing, Bruce." You said, placing a pile of dishes by the sink.

"Thank you, I try." Bruce smiled at you, putting down his stack of dishes before pushing up his glasses. Steve walked in and put his dishes by the sink as well, "Can we just run the dish washer?"

"Yes, seeing as we're short on time we can." Bruce replied. You smiled at this, thankful that you wouldn't have to get pruny fingers, before starting to rinse the dishes and putting them in the dishwasher.

"What do you think Asgard's like, (Y/N)?" Steve questioned, crossing his ar
Crashed (LokiXReader) 11You followed behind the Avengers as they followed Thor, who navigated the halls of Asgard with easy. "I must warn you of Loki's appearance beforehand." Thor stated turning another corner.

"How bad is he?" Steve asked, for once letting his curiosity get the better of him. "He....how do I put this kindly? Has not had access to any....styling products?"

"Ah, so it's the hair, it's always the hair," Tony chuckled, his hands in the pockets of his Asgardian overcoat. "Yes, the hair among other things."

"Hey, Tony?" You asked, breaking your long silence. Tony slowed down so he could walk alongside you, "Yeah?"

"Do mind if I ask why your entire p
Crashed (LokiXReader) 6After going back to the dining room, you listened patiently as Thor explained his plan to the others.

"Sweet! Road trip!" Tony said, unfolding his arms before leaning back into his chair.

"Will your father be okay with this?" Natasha asked, leaning forward so that her crossed arms rested on the table.

"Yes, he would be more than happy to welcome friends." Thor folded his arms across his chest, "Besides, Heimdall has probably already informed my father of our plan."

"Well, if Thor says it's okay then I'm going to trust him." Clint leaned back in his chair, precariously balancing it on two legs before draping an arm over the back of Natasha
Crashed (LokiXReader) 5"Lady (Y/N), are you alright?" Thor questioned, looking at you with a concerned expression on his face.

"Umm, yeah, I just..." You pushed yourself away from the table, "Need some fresh air." You stood up and walked out of the dining room, pushing back the loose strands of hair that had fallen from your hair tie.

"What was that about?" You heard Clint say before you were out of hearing range of the dining room.

You walked quickly to the elevator and pushed the call button, the elevator doors opening almost instantly.

"J.A.R.V.I.S.?"

"Yes Miss (Y/N)?"

"Can you take the elevator to the roof?"

"Of course, but I do suggest you be careful."
Crashed (LokiXReader) 13You followed behind Thor and Loki, your eyes cast to the ground. You looked up suddenly with the strange feeling that someone was watching you. You turned and glanced out the windows you were currently walking past, only to see the same man from the mirror at Stark tower. You blinked and he disappeared.

But that's impossible, Loki's right in front of me...unless...

You suddenly remembered something Loki had said about the Enchantress being a shift shaper. "Um, Thor?" You asked nervously, unsure how to word the question you wanted to ask.

He stopped and turned to you, Loki turning with him, "What is it Lady (Y/N)?"

"Do you feel like you'r
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Mari: Prologue

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A girl, barely 16, was driving along in a black Miata behind her parent's large red Ford truck. She couldn't see them beyond the massive trailer they were hauling as they were moving across the state. She had a walkie-talkie sitting next to her in the opposite seat. There was too much to bring to fit her and all their pets in the truck, so she offered to drive by herself with a few of her own things – she also had a trailer, but it was much smaller. Her parents, of course, had been reluctant to let her drive on her own.
"But Mari," her mother had sighed. "You just barely got your license!  You shouldn't be out on your own, sweetheart!"
"I'd be fine, mom," She replied, secretly believing the opposite herself at the time. "It's only a few miles and we're not leaving the country. I'll stay right behind you the entire time."
"I think it'd be a good idea," her dad said, his tone rough as always. "Mari needs a bit of experience all on her own! Let's see how she does."
And that was it, they were off. They packed up the animals and went on their way.

Mari glanced around after a few miles of silent driving, with occasional check-ins from her mother. She noticed a sign on the side of the road; a large, wooden one displaying the words, "Avalon Forest". She shuddered in fear. She had heard that there had been unexplained, unsolved disappearances that have happened for millennia in this forest. It suddenly struck her that she should not be alone here.

And then, hours later…

She woke up.
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Critique by ~TheLastWhiteRose85 Jan 9, 2013, 10:04:04 AM
I loved this piece. The grammar was great the readability was incredible as a result. I also liked the storyline it made me want to keep reading. You are an amazing writer. I am looking forward to reading the story as you post it and I have time.

I had a couple of things that I felt were unclear. One of them is a more trivial thing while the other could help the story improve when cleared up. I will start with the biggest part that was unclear, was the prologue in its entirety a dream? Also the more trivial thing, that could make some difference, were the animals riding with her or her parents.

Overall as I said I believe this has a lot of potential, looking forward to reading the rest.
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I really like this, Critique coming soon. I actually completely wrote one up and couldn't rate the different things cause my PS3 doesn't let me.
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